I put a link on my homepage to my IMVU portable on this forum. Link is called "IMVU Portable @ Mafia"
EDIT: And the banner is very artistic, Mariko. Although the font is a bit off, difficult to read.
Try this: attempt to read the whole message in 2-3 seconds without putting much effort in it. If your eyes catch the whole sentence(s) and comprehend their meaning, its fine.
Thanks to mass media, people want info without much effort 24/7. If they got to put effort in it, higher the chance they lose their interest.
And while the current composition hints a deep artist inside of you, mass media is not much about art. It's about punchlines, gaining attention. Dark letters with a quite dark background may indeed hint to a mafias true nature (as dabbeling in illegal activities, darkness), but the comprehension capabilitie suffers.
Haven't you learned writing a newspaper article at school? You start with the big things, big facts. I mean like *motions a picture frame with his hands like cameramen do*
"BOOM, what happened, WHY did it happen, WHO is to blame (and so on...)??